Saddness briming from every pore
Hopelessness she can't ignore.
Wishing on a star
Even though that never got her very far.
Living lies she cannot hide.
Feeling that she lived and died.
What is the reason for her to stay?
When fate has taken them all away.
Crying softly
The tears will flow
The wind picks up
Away she'll blow.
What did you think
Comments
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wow....its great! short..yet powerful
keep up the good work!
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I love the last stanza. Very sad and powerful.
Great write.
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