Fragility's song
brushed chaffed lips
star-like tears fell
without comfort
broken carousels
distorted the sun
once gleeful
angelic eyes contorted
upon cold stone
it fell
without repair
it's center shattered
Author notes
Prompt: Glass (30 words)
A contest entry
- Another Prompt by AliceinPoetryLand.
700 points, ended November 23, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congratulations on the Silver! This is awesome. I can relate to the feelings you have so well described. Well done.
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Ohn this is so sad but so beautifullly penned. Thank you so much for your entry
Gaylene
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WOWAAA!!
i absolutely admire your abilities to describe a broken heart!! i would have never came up with that! amazing poetry
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very interesting take on the prompt. as always, beautifully written my friend
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