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I Can See

Why did you follow?
I left the pain behind,
but you stayed there.
Am I that blind?

Our love was true,
but the pain was greater.
I left without your opinion,
I was your traitor.

But you held strong,
even though your hand was bare.
Even when I was gone,
you were always there.

I never thought,
I'd see you on the road.
You smiled so sweetly,
my heart was about to explode.

You left it all behind,
just as I did.
Now we will always be,
even if heaven were to forbid.

Author notes

I was inspired by "I will follow you into the dark"
its lame i know but i had the tune in my head

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