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Venomous poison

Venomous poison.

The devil disguised as an angel.
The thorns on a rose.
The razor in your halloween candy.
The man that you thought you loved.

Everywhere.
To your left.
To your right.
Past.
Present.
Future.

Venomous poison.

Watch your back.
Before you know if your poisoned.
Stunned of movement.

Betrayed.
Broken.
Hatred.

Embrace the venom.
It's not leaving soon

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  • AllLoveIsGone
    November 23, 2008
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    wow thats a kewl poem


    • x.burning.desire.x
      November 24, 2008
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      thanks, it was a freewrite--I really like it though, and I want to work on it. It could use lots of improvement, but its a rough draft