In shadowy, ghost-like corners
winter finds her space
In the cedar-limbs
and weeping pines
that I dare not fall beside
without the overspread
of well disguised
feet
Author notes
boots
A contest entry
- Prompt by AliceinPoetryLand.
700 points, ended November 24, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like the imagery you give off in this poem...
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Sorry so late.
Today's Poem: November 23, 2008
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wow amazing description.. truly hit deep and penned out marvelously...
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You have used such wonderful imagery here. Bravo!
Mariana
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You make winter wonderful...and for to had snow here yesterday in Holland your words are even more beautiful
XXJeannette
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Excellent metaphor and imagery in this. A wonderful write indeed. Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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Wonderful work with this prompt!
Thanks a lot for sharing this one here.
I really enjoyed reading it!
Jeremy0826 -
Beautiful poem. Imagery is amazing. Incredible.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Very nice take on the prompt, very discriptive.
Beautiful...Best of luck in the contest
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