from all the books I've ever read ~
nothing brought me more satisfaction
than the remainder of last nights illusion
at the bottom of my transparent vessel
held longer than you...
Author notes
glass
A contest entry
- Another Prompt by AliceinPoetryLand.
700 points, ended November 23, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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So very creative and sad. Wonderful wording used in this.
Thank you for your entry
Gaylene
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Grin...I have looked through that same looking glass and found all things much better looking. Great take on the prompt.
Very Good....Best wishes in the contest
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Such a deep and meaning take on the prompt. As always, your way with words goes way beyond, and always inspires. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp
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