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What are we

A life is something that you learn from.
That you experiance of
What is right and what is wrong.
A life is how you understand who you are.
But if you are suppose
To come out with something good and knowing,
Then why is mine so difficult?
I open my eyes to all i have
And to what is always there to understand.
But why do i find nothing?

I find a star in the sky and a moon.
But nothing more.
I find no help.
I find not my life.
But why do i find nothing?
I need a something...
I need a light.

So... what do you think?

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  • lillypilly
    November 24, 2008
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    very well done..i like it..


  • Simply Olivia
    November 23, 2008

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    I can relate to what you have written, even though I am older than you.
    I think that we work through our lives, bit by bit, step by step.
    You have many opportunities ahead of you