Light breaks
in silent awe
shadows in symphony
morning dew drops imprint linen
...bodies.
Author notes
Picture prompt & quote:
Sitting on Boulders at Deep Cove
we upwrap daybreak
like an unexpected gift
our bodies so close we feel each other's thoughts
our mouths exhale horizon
sun folds her wings
her warmth sleeping in the heart of wood
- Darlene Spong Henderson
A contest entry
- morning songs by Nicolette.
1400 points, ended December 6, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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nice
though, unlike my co-judge, i'm as dumb as a sack of hammers when it comes to form poetry.
still, i like the dew drops implication on linen
thank you for sharing this piece with us
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Aaah, you've written a cinquain - one of my favourite poetry forms! Very nice twist there in the 5th line and some lovely visuals here. Well done!
Thank you for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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morning dew drops imprint linen - oooh I loved that visual. Nicely done. This was so soft and tender to tread. Well done ~Pamela
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