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H appiness dwells in a families love
O ver many years of memories and tears
M om and Dad smiling at new baby, you
E nter here and remember growing up

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 25, 2008

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    An nicely done acrostic. While I asked for Free verse, I am glad to have read this today. I am home from home and visiting my chidlren and new grandbabies....and I knwo that sense of being home by the smell of a new baby!. Thank you for entering.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 23, 2008

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    you know this kind of makes me think i have never really had a home, that i could call by that definition, but this is a wonderful poem, i enjoyed reading it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest