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Shades of Reality




-Gone which is lasting
--Brushing whispers throughout us
-Forever at rest


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Haven't been inspired for awhile, I guess. Just a quick Haiku I've been thinking of putting into tattoo form.

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  • Titus gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    well done, you've reached the second round

  • Titus gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    reality? more finality, this shows so much inevitableness, it's sad to think that this could imagine lost faith.