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See How I Want You

Behind mist of saddened eyes,
deep within such passion lies.
Within the soul a burning fire,
mirror reflects hidden desire.

Pent up passion wants release,
longing for you will never cease.
How you thrill, how you please,
thoughts drive me wild, tease.

Fiery eyes looking back at me,
with such longing to be set free.
See lips pouty, wanting kisses,
remember touches body misses.

A mirror full of sensuality,
lay before, starring back at me.
Eyes sparkling with love divine,
love awakens this heart of mine.




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  • dustytiger
    November 23, 2008

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    this is beautiful, i am amazed at what you did with the prompt here, it is just beautiful and really has a lot to say, best of luck in the contest


    • Sandygram
      November 24, 2008
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      Lovely Comment

      Thank you for stopping by and reading. Your nice comment is appreciated. Have a great week. Take care. Sandy


  • eternalsol
    November 23, 2008
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    awwww

    this is beautiful i love your take in my contest thanx so much for entering