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Age

Tick

The candle's shadow lengthens
As sound slowly dies

Tock

All my friends are dead
Never had many friends

Tick

No-one remembers the mad old woman
Leave the mouldy bread for the mad old woman

Tock

Can't see like I used to, dear
Can't hear like I used to, dear
Can only taste soup, me teeth are long gone dear
Can't think like I used to, dear

Tick

If only the wolf would gobble me up
That I might at least be remembered for that

Tock

And the candlelight shadows get longer and longer
And all I can see is the glint of the scythe

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  • nobodys-girl
    January 2

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    wow...very dark and depressing. just what i was looking for. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!