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The Ride



Yes it was a coming of age
my boys first two wheel bike
fully equipped with training wheels
it was a special day for my tyke

The setting in the country
long lane and a great big yard
one would think it would be simple
I never imagined it could be this hard

Our laneway shared with an elderly couple
only a Cadillac, theirs parked in the yard
the boy was doing great all up and down the lane
he seemed to be a natural, it didn’t seem hard

As the bike veered towards the Cadillac
I noticed there was no reduction in speed
as he crashed with speed into the drivers door
I was left to explain this most uncomfortable deed

































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4. Retell a tale of something funny that happened in your past, that wasn't funny at the time, but now, it is freaking hilarious.
Karl Weiss - Topaz

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  • peregrin
    November 23, 2008
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    Hahaha, tee.
    Ok, that fits perfectly.
    Yay.

    Gwen


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Oh my, the sight that your words have painted. I hope the son was okay. Wonder what the elder couple thought about it all.

    Joann