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Morning's First Kiss

As I wake up from my sleep
I look over at you
So soundly asleep
I tenderly whisper in your ear

It's a beautiful way to start our day
Giving our love to each other in a kiss
A kiss to carry us through the day
Backed up by a couple little pecks

A contest entry

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  • grm
    December 4, 2008

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    yup...smooching is always the best way to start the day


    thank you for this real life moment as an entry


    • Katie Lazette
      December 4, 2008
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      You are most welcome. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.


  • Nicolette gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    a very sweet and tender poem that speaks of love at its purest. i liked the soft intimacy here, as well as the contentment.

    this is definately the way to start one's day! thank you for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette


  • ennovy silver member
    November 24, 2008

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    Becareful them morning kisses they might spark a fire....LOL this a cute poem and I enjoyed reading it....Novy


  • tawk gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    What a beautiful and heartfelt write. I know I love to watch Jason sleeping, and watch him wake up and then cuddle and get that first kiss of the day. thanks for sharing good luck in the contest. Hugs Theresa

    • Katie Lazette
      November 24, 2008
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      Thanks Tawk, glad you enjoyed reading my poem and commenting on it.


  • Mozaic
    November 23, 2008

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    Tender...

    ...and sweet. An intimate look at contentment at it's best! Good luck in the contest


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    and perhaps something a little more intimate,, who knows.. a lovely tender write x good luck


    • Katie Lazette
      November 23, 2008
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      That's right Pete, one never knows. Thank you for reading and for your comment.

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