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the Power of a Kiss

A kiss in the morning
To kindle each other's day.
One again later on
To keep up on our way.

Love bridges the gaps.
Where live tries
To pull us another way.
Love has a way of keeping us.

A kiss in the evening
Where two hearts
Once again are joined.
Love and live breath out and in.

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  • grm
    December 4, 2008

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    i agree with my co-judge...even angels hither to enjoy a kiss---
    morning breath and night's drool notwithstanding. lol

    thank you for this soft entry


  • Nicolette gold member
    December 3, 2008
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    a kiss can indeed be a very powerful thing, especially those long, soft ones

    this is a very sweet poem and yes, to start and to end the day with a kiss is definately the way to go. i know i asked for free verse but the rhyme in the first stanza fell very nice on the ears and i almost wished you continued with it!

    thank you for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette