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March 2008

Wipe your tears baby wipe your tears
Please don't cry I'm here to chase away your fears
Close your eyes and listen to the song inside
Can't you see it's obvious we can't hide?

Spread your arms and look into the sky
See those little happy butterflies
They don't have time to live or grow
But they never show any trace of sorrow

No matter what people try to say
I'll be with you come what may
You don't have to be mine if it hurts so bad
I just want you to smile and not be sad

Everything happens for a reason
Friends come and go like different seasons
If we don't make mistakes then we're not human
Be brave and go through it like a real man

Spread your invisible wings and try to fly
Even if you fall at least you try
And we learn with every step we take
Living life is not a piece of cake

So now you see whatever it may be
We stand and sometimes fall down on one knee
Though I wish that dreams can really do come true
Together or not I'll still love you

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  • Cant force beloved
    December 10, 2008
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    Yes, delete the other one, before people start leaving comments and you are stuck with two.

    Happy reading

  • Cant force beloved
    November 23, 2008

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    I loved this poem, very much. However, the last two stanza's could use the revision, I felt mildly confused on those.

    Beautifully written Licketysplit.