New Hampshire’s granite:
cooled evolution
pockets represent gasps
like bubbling lung
when earth eye closes
for time taken
to blink
in bright first sun
A contest entry
- morning songs by Nicolette.
1400 points, ended December 6, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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curiously, i am currently reading a novel which begins with a focus on pre-Aztec scuplture. so i find a certain sense of kismet in this piece.
how wonderful that we all have different ears and find morning's music in various ways
thank you for this quality entry
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made me think of how life can pass one by in the blink of an eye. "cooled evolution" what a great phrase that is, Carol...lots of light here on this page and a lovely original take on the contest theme.
thank you for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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"cooled evolution" i love those words together...this makes me feel that brightness...best of luck, Carol
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Beautifully done
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