Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

To Whom I Belong

Waiting for the day to come,
When the sun shall rise,
And aloneness falls.

It's all about the pain, you see...
Of watching for my love to be,
Waiting...for my heart to beat.

Come the day,
When he'll overtake,
Brash, yet cool and calm.

And what am I?
A simple girl.
Lost in love, and fantasies.

Waiting for the one,
To whom I belong.  

Hey, tell me what you think!

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • littlelively
    November 27, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Waiting for the day to come,
    When the sun shall rise,
    And aloneness falls.

    It's all about the pain, you see...
    Of watching for my love to be,
    Waiting...for my heart to beat.

    Beautifully expressed.


  • larkbird
    November 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Wow!

    Loved this poem! I can so relate, seeing as, like anyone, I've had moments of being there.
    This is a really great poem, and very simple and to the point. Well done, and good luck
    God Bless
    Larkbird