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Confusion

Don't pray for it to rain
Don't look to the sky
Hold me with your lonesome eyes
You slipped into my life
In your simple disguise
Take me with your furtive eyes
I wait for time to come my way again
"Stay here," your sorrow's luring me in
But, does this sorrow ever end
Sadness invites me,
Entices me to you
Don't let me go
You first came to me, as a melody
Now, you feel uninspiring

The pain in your face has all been replaced
I'm tired of useless words and laughing
With you, I felt time lift
And carry me away
I want you with me,
But all you feel is cold
Is this getting old?
Your look of sadness,
It fills me with desire
My heart's on fire
Come here, come near
There's no one like you
Let's burn up the past
This room...

When I was with you
I could see it, day by day
Facades...
They faded away from us
How will you get by?
You know...
I've never much cared
For foolish affairs
You cheat...
You smile...
You laugh at my desire...
Crazy...
I'm crazy for...
What am I crazy for?

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  • Smokebox
    November 24, 2008

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    Unrequited love in a relationship. Nice twist. One can almost experience the pain felt. Great job!! Thanks for entering and good luck!!