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Ocean Water

Vigorous swirls
of green, white, and shades of blue.
natural, beautiful abstract picture
colliding waves
mixing colors, textures, and perspectives
the foam, the calm, the harsh waves
combine together
in a surround sound picture
of the glorious ocean.

Author notes

in my creative writing class we had to write a poem inspired by art so I picked "Waves Breaking" by Claude Monet. now keep in mind that my creative writing class is at 9:30-10:30 in the morning and I have writer's block.

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  • katie-jo
    March 28

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    wow.

    if i could write like this when i get writer's block...that would be incredible. this is beautiful, and it seems so difficult for me to believe that you had writer's block when you wrote this. you did great. :]


    • PoetSings813
      April 17
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      lol thanks, can you read my short story, City of Love, and see what you think? its actually one thing i wrote that i actually like. it's based off something that really happened.