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Little One Slumbered

sleep little one
laurel garland
slumbered of winter's
stormy rain
this mirror reflection.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 8, 2008
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    awww.
    this makes me think
    and smile.
    but weep for those who can't have love.

    • saddie23
      December 8, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given and i'm glad I could put a smile that means my writing is improving. Saddie23


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    Interesting piece here

    Written with a muse that leaves the mind as though listening to a lullaby

    • saddie23
      November 29, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem, and applaudes are most appreciated. Saddie27


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 23, 2008
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    wow ~ how immensely captivating... x

    • saddie23
      November 23, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given. Saddie23


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    oh, this is lovely

    • saddie23
      November 23, 2008
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      thank you

      thank you for the wonderful comment. Saddie23

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