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A young man from eastern Congo

He was born during the war
It's still going on
All he saw was violence
Him and his family suffered alot
Life hasn't been fair to them
The war became part of his dialy life
his future is a distant memory
His hope is to die
How aweful

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  • Balthazar
    November 23, 2008
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    I heard his story at condition-critical.org and he's far from being alone. The Congolese government and the rebels in Northern and Southern Kivu are acting like 5 year old children while there are millions of people are suffering in eastern Congo. What kind of the world do we live in