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silence ringing

8:00
Sat here last night, and told my friends to go without me
Didnt tell them what was so obvious to see
I was waiting with bated breathe and a paused heart
For the world to once more start
8:45
I stared at this book and didn't see the words
Was slowly denying the oncoming hurt
I couldn't convince myself that you werent calling
So sure you just forgot about me
10:00
I hold this razor and let it kiss my skin
Here we go, you did it again
The world halts and the tears start to crash around me
In the noise of a slient ring

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  • xXundeadXx
    November 23, 2008
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    chels...

    is this...About...me?


  • November-Dani
    November 23, 2008

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    Oh man, this is like it has been just pulled straight out of my heart. I absolutly love it. I am going through a time similar. Really hit home.
    Well done.
    Dani.