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Best Friends?

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Hangin' out on his ears
my chin on his eyes,
my new bestest friend
I'm gonna surprise.

He loves me I know
and we blend fur to fur,
as I cover his eyes
he's all in a blur.

But I'm soft and I'm cute
and he thinks I'm his child,
when he finds out it's me
he's sure to go wild!

Right now all I want
is a jolly good feed,
if I play my cards right
then I'm sure to succeed.

That cake is really
the object of my affections,
but if he finds out I'm a guinea pig
I'll lose all my protection.

I think I'll just wait
until he's well asleep
and then to my meal
I can softly creep

If he wakes I'm a goner
of that there's no doubt,
then I'll know what rejection
is surely about

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  • Margaret Denham gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    The picture is so cute and your poem fitted it to a T

    The rhyme was perfect and there was just the right amount of gentle humour there as well.

    Love Margaret


  • daviscth silver member
    November 26, 2008

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    LOL!!! What an adorable poem for the picture!!! You did a wonderful job with the humor. Best of luck in the contest.


  • LiMarie silver member
    November 26, 2008

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    this is funny sweet and ironic all rolled up, not an easy feat! Great job


  • A63-Angel
    November 24, 2008
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    this is adorable and I can see the words you wrote thru this picture so clearly. great job!


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Awwww....cute write !

    I just love that pic...it's soooooooo cute and you have penned an equally cute and funny poem Best of luck in this contest


  • Pete Greenslade
    November 23, 2008
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    fury little friends how they draw out the happy poem in us ..good write good luck miss,


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    November 23, 2008

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    LOL This is such a cute piece. I feel bad for the mouse by the end. It still got some laughs out of me. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • penman gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    Excellent

    aww, this was great. You gave it such a wonderful feel. Best of luck in the contest

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