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First words

"muh"

A soft murmur floated,
a feather falling on silk
Marshmallow lips pursed
in absolute, unconditional love

The syllable holds within,
a promise of devotion
Wisps of joy intertwine,
radiant innocence and love

"mah"

The syllables unite in glee,
laughter fills the cosmos
The word dances in the air
Hearts soar in a cloud of love

The promise is complete,
the euphoria only begun
Mesmerising first word,
bonding two souls in love

Author notes

7) He sputtered his words one syllable at a time

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  • daviscth silver member
    November 23, 2008

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    Oh...... this is just so adorable!!!!!!! I love the place you took your prompt. The imagery is awesome. Thanks for sharing in my contest.