Soundly asleep,
burying silent weeps.
Away from clouds,
lying a blithe girl.
Author notes
painted by Daeni Pino
A contest entry
- between 3 and 15 words ~ amaze me... by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 23, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - An Invitation for Everyone by Anna Emkah.
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Comments
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Nicely done in only a few words.
I especially like the first two lines:
Soundly asleep,
burying silent weeps.
It makes you think... did the girl cry? Why?
Anna.
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beautifully creative... x
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this is beautiful
good luck
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Sweet poem.
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