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Embrace Me Eternally

Theres pain
And then there's agony
Our love
Is pure fire
I feel
As if I let you go
I'll call
Myself a liar

I'll think
That you had never lived
This love
Was just a dream
Instead of
Holding you so close
I'll wake
And always scream

Cry out
For you my darling love
My summer
And my spring
My sun
My moon and stars above
My soul
And everything

Please love
Stay within my arms
My tender
And soft embrace
One day
I pray we live as one
Our love
Long-blessed by grace

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 6, 2008

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    soft and just breath taking...how the heart does long to hold on to that which it loves so deeply...excellent and thank you for entering and sharing