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Evilutionary Outcome

Insects crawl across
the screen
for a taste of DNA
split bombs of blood
dessert dry, sun soaked
good byes.

Evilutionary outcome -

Waiting for those two legged
to erase from exsistance.

A race across
the screen
for a taste of DNA.

See who kills who,
how many, how long
will it take?

Evilutionary outcome
for the sake of insects
ruling with taste
for DNA.

Make no bloody mistake
they were here long before
they will be here long after.

Evilutionary outcome...

Author notes

Alwin my resident chipmonk came face to face with Chubby the mouse last night while running away to keep from getting under my feet. They met up under my computer desk. At first as I watched I thought Chubby would run away.
Instead I watched Alwin push a piece of dog bisquit towards the mouse. The mouse then reveiled a small piece of what looked like raw oodle and noodle from under his belly. They both then sat nibbling while turning to watch me watching them. Um... interesting.

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  • imperfectperfection silver member
    November 23, 2008
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    Very Interesting

    clever tale of reality
    creeping up in the dark alley
    under the gray clouds
    evilutionary unveils blood thirsty story...

    great write - though unusual from your writings... great I love it... welcome to the darker shades of life hahahaha!!! its suppose to be creepy kinda laugh -

    take care Minoo


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    clever..

    how intriguing a piece you have here! and boy are those interesting..


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 23, 2008
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    Great title...Evilutionary

    I was going to tell you Evolutionary...and then I reconsidered. Catchy tale of reality!!!!