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Paused



wait


standing with your million
reasonable explanations

i wanted to fly

wanted to fall


breathe





stop.

Author notes

It's not always complex.

Prompt::
"i float in an endless sea of nothingness.
i decompose and rot; no Jesus to resurrect me."
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