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Her arteries were crushed...she couldn't breathe, and she died from heartache

Jesus died
standing in the mirror
with that stupid
emo hair cut...
wandering down the
dusty
road of hell
chatting on a cellphone
that gave static
relationships new meaning.
Dark black lipstick pasted
on lips that bled
lies and terror.
A starry lullabye
that only Van Gogh
understood
and painted with miracles
and happenstance;
they ( the army of one )
marched on Washington
holding signs barring
reality and actuality
from our present nightmare.
Clutching our past tightly
to our chests
we wander...
we wander until our
Chuck Taylors
who had not failed us
before
Start speaking
with ambigous tongues.
Our faith was shaken
all in the name of
a label.

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bwahaha. I love writers block and random bouts of " creativity"

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  • Writeous
    January 22
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    lol craziness..creativity is out there


  • BlancetNoir gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    A mish mash? That's a great mish mash. It's very intriguing, it hatches a lot of cool visuals for me, the last three lines in particular got to me. I like your username.


    • requiempoet gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you!! I'm not sure how I really put together poems...This is how it comes out! bwahh thanks for commenting.


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    November 26, 2008
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    I totally enjoyed your use of words!!!! I like your style! Pam


    • requiempoet gold member
      November 26, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment!!! I was bored so I totally just mish mashed some words and VIOLA!!!


  • VianneErekev
    November 24, 2008

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    Wow.

    I like this. It flows really well! I know what you mean about random bouts of creativity too! Glad you had this one to share!

    Always,
    V

    • requiempoet gold member
      November 26, 2008
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      I totally didn't get your comment till now!! Thanks for commenting!

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