She dwells amongst the waterfalls
cascading at her feet,
the essence of all beauty
in a world that's so complete.
Her peaceful spirit cleansing all
a place where nature rests,
she breathes in rhythm heavenly
and all are truly blessed.
As bird of rainbow colours
alights gently on her form,
he sings so softly in her ear
that all is safe and warm.
For she personifies this world
where all sway in harmony,
her dreams of peace and grandeur
gives this place a guarantee.
Those with heart of malice
shall never pass through here,
the gates are locked and bolted
from those who aren't sincere.
A sphere of wondrous miracles
for all willing to share,
the entrance fee requested
is merely that you care.
Author notes
13. Tropical Beauty
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A contest entry
- Pic Prompt: BREATH-TAKING FANTASY! by The Moonchild.
700 points, ended December 9, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a good piece of poetry, ah to be sat is safety and warmth, to feel the colours of love and life shine brightly.
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I love that you chose this pic! The background is beautiful and the title suits it perfectly!
I like the first sentence of the second stanza, I think it captures the essence of what this girl represents.
The 5th stanza is interesting. I like how you mentioned that those who are not sincere cannot enter this place. It reminds me of paradise or Eden. The last sentence of the poem ends it all powerfully!
Thanks for entering my contest!
Blessings,
~Moonchild
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