Another silent night
We face away in bed
I cannot sleep at all
As memories fill my head
Like how you lips say love
Your eyes though disagree
And how I cannot stand
Your jade-green jealousy
What caused all this heart-break,
And brought on all these tears?
Where once we kissed so soft
Our lips are used to sear
Cheating's not a problem
Im not in an affair
But our relationship
Is full of your despair
Breaking up is painful
But in a way relief
Im sorry it has come
To all this bitter grief
Author notes
Written for a contest, not based on my real life. I hope you enjoy it. : )
A contest entry
- ~Breaking up is hard to do...Come one Come all and Enter by angels of the night.
705 points, ended November 24, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So... what do you think?
Comments
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the endin of ur poem has touched me and its based onn life, life sux! which i mean break-up does.!! i love the flow of this poem and very well done!
~angels of light~
good luck in my contest
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To a bitter end...Love does take on many forms and an investment of both parties. When it fails we are left to pick up the pieces. Sucks! Great penning. Good luck in our contest. ~Sie
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