Watching bubbles
flying higher than toyplanes,
they realised nothing flew higher
than their dreams...
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: painted by Daeni Pino
14 words
A contest entry
- In fourteen words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 23, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was very captivating. A stunning write.
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how lovely... x
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Aww this is just too gorgeous! It fits the picture so very well.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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I hope Gypsy doesnt think its cliche
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