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The Silent Phone

Cold snow on your front lawn,
This place is an empty room,
And my ribs feel so cold,

You say you'll call,
but I know you're safe in someone's arms,
You'll go back and sleep alone,
in your crowded bed,
With your body that you give to the lonely,

I wish I could ease the pain,
that you clutch onto,
I wish I could change those tears
to kisses on your cheeks.

In empty hope,
I'll sit by my silent phone,

Clouds cover the empty sky,
This heart is a dark place,
yet some how my mind is so hopeful.

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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    what a beautiful write very delicatr and tender this is like butterfly kisses in my heart and


  • Smokebox
    November 23, 2008

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    Amazing how the head can tell you there's no chance but your heart can't let go of the smallest possibility. great entry for the contest. Love the title also. Good luck!!


  • techno-tard
    November 23, 2008
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    Wow ummm when did you get into my life lol...very well written I really felt it


  • November-Dani
    November 23, 2008
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    This is awesome.
    Great writing.

    Dani.