My love eternal,
Immortal you might say.
Watching her walk away wishing she would turn around
Never knowing what to say
And always casting away what you want to say
Her hair sways with the breeze as you lean closer just wanting even the scent of her to cross your path
Hopelessly chasing her only wanting to be the only one to love her
This my hope, my wish,....my dream.
A contest entry
- Unrequited love by Smokebox.
550 points, ended December 8, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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very pretty. made me happy! sad poem though...but i loved it anyway!!
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Very nice. Definitely a great unrequited love poem.
"Her hair sways with the breeze as you lean closer just wanting even the scent of her to cross your path"
My favorite line. Good luck in the contest!!
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