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The Price to Pay

Sharpest
Purest
Harshest
Coldest
Skating on the Sharpest, Purest frost
She will have the Harshest, Coldest cost

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  • Sunkissed xo
    November 23, 2008

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    Wow! This write is so eerie, dark and powerful, it almost swallows me whole! There is so much meaning hidden in this poem, it is so specific and yet so inverted. Wow. This is truly special. Well done on a fabulous write, once again!
    xx


  • Summer52
    November 23, 2008

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    Indeed it will be the price to pay...
    "skating on the sharpest, purest frost
    she will have the harshest, coldest cost."

    Good luck to you.


    summer51


  • Lady Michaella
    November 23, 2008

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    OMFG taz, this is amazing! Really... it is so smart and witty and omg.....!!!! eep! One thing though, please dont center it, its really anoying. otherwize, it it witty, cold,dark, and beautiful! I'm positivly sure this is your best write ever!!!!
    really.
    xx

    • Black-Fang
      November 23, 2008
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      haha lol i think thats the 2nd or 3rd time uv sed that to 1 of my poems how :S but thanks
      i shall uncenter it now

      xxx

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