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Face Time

I could stare at your eyes for hours
hoping they are looking at me the same way
And that smile
decorating your pristine silhouette

Your hair flowing
almost as if God had given a breeze
for that perfect moment
just for you.

May I have my moment in the sun
with your face pressed against me?
And a blissful second
to have you be mine.

To hear those words so yearned for
I love you
And to return the favor
and bring a smile to my face this time

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  • samantha jean
    November 23, 2008

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    So peaceful and hopeful. It's a very settling piece, as well as very sweet.
    Great write. Poems like this are rare and very genuine. It's refreshing to read a piece like this.
    Thanks for the smile.