Rain-bowed bubbles
Captivate fascination
Ageless wonder
Delighting the heart
In its flight of joy
Author notes
Painted by Daeni Pino
A contest entry
- In fourteen words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 23, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is wonderful. Fits the prompt to perfection. It's beautiful and brilliantly descriptive. It's quite powerful, brings back childhood memories in me, anyway! Great flow and I can't say it enough: brilliantly descriptive.
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BEATIFUL
great match to the prompt well done indeed
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SUCH A HAPPY SCENE!!!!!
It is those old childhood happy, playing times, the ones where we played so innocently and happily that still make people happy today. In this day of technology and such it is still the simplest games and toys which make children the happiest.
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Now how did I miss this? I always try and comment on other writes in contests I'm in. You've captured the wonder of childhood in your words... lovely.
Ken
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beautiful, this really was very touching to read, so full of innocence
it also reminds me of a song about west ham united football club
''im forever blowing bubbles''
great write once again
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14 words and so endearing.. =) Loved this. It's very touching..there's so much beauty in this piece! A great write!
Love,
Alyzeh
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Magical Jessan! The beautiful picture stirs vivid memories for me , when as a child I would play for hours with a bubble pot. Your words capture the moment well...mal
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I will write this review in fourteen words...just another bubbly work Jesaan! THANKS!
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just wonderful... x
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This is a great take on the picture.
Bubbles seem to be such magical things
to little children. Good luck here!
Jeremy0826
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