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dreams (gold)

Missing image




She sighs into cupped longing
dreaming of someday being
his forget me not

 

 

 

 

Author notes

13 word

Picture by Amalia

A contest entry

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    WOW I missed alot in a week...such a beautiful picture and stunning words to match...you do brevity with such style...well deserving of the Gold!
    Congrat's,
    mystic


  • chilali
    November 28, 2008

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    WOW! This is just! Wow. Incredible. Out of this world! You are a genius! Congratulations on the Gold Sam! Well done big sister Hehe


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 24, 2008

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    OMG
    This is marvellous
    In so very few words
    what in interesting take on the picture
    Too good

    Congrats on the Gold, so well deserved

    Ken


  • Room without doors gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Outstanding

    I loved the simplicity of this poem. You show that one well-chosen image can be inspirational. I liked the romantic message of this poem and your choice of language. Congratulations on the gold trophy.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 23, 2008
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    this is just beautiful... x


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Just gorgeous hun! The yearning in this is quite palpable.
    All the best with this
    Gaylene


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 23, 2008

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    Oh the wish is so soft and innocent the heart just beats for it

    Beautiful
    Best of Luck
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love to You
    ~Manda

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