I am aware
without choice,
goings on inside me.
chooising is shallow
albeit inner,
observe without observer
free of background;
to find,
limitless depths of truth.
Author notes
prompt: but I never felt so awake...
A contest entry
- lack of sleep by written-in-ink.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oh wow
i think that you did an amazing job
great take on the prompt
thank you and good luck -
a very wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest
maralisa
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Silence is golden
without intrusions
we awaken to simplicity
BEAUTIFULLY DONE
God bless you my friend...
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