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Blades of Grass

Unfurling, flashing, silvered blades, scything through the field

Green blades stand tall, defiant in the wind

The two sides meet, and part

Green blades scatter, flung through the air

Others bend, supplicating before the might of the glinting blades

A battle lost as the green blades hang in an impossible moment

Falling to the ground, the blades come to rest

The silvered blades march on, devastation in their wake

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It took me a while, but I was finally happy with the imagery.

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  • takingthedog
    November 22, 2008
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    Profound

    Truely; at present.