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Inner beauty

gleaning close
to know
what makes tender flower
so pretty,
beckoning so unpretentious.

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Pic by ~ Amalia

13 words

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  • maralisa silver member
    November 23, 2008
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    avery beaurtiful poem I love the creative touchs dad good luck it the contest


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 23, 2008
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    beautifully creative... x


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    Breathtaking

    That about sums it up in one word! You flow so smoothly sometimes it seems unreal. Fantastic write and best of luck in the contest. Love, Mandie