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umbrella remember

daughter's askance,
chance of younger almost as tall
brother in water color;

found clothes washed

A contest entry

please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes

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  • Girl in Red
    December 19, 2008
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    Nicely said, a picture painted in the reader's mind.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    November 29, 2008

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    This is so beautiful, I love the images you have swirled into my head. Congratulations on your win with this.


    whisper


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    How fabulously creative... x


    • mbm
      November 23, 2008
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      GypsyButterfly I was struck to stoke...

      thanks for finding it notable and to the point of a trophy -- I immediately pinned it to my profile, knowing many feelings were there but almost wanted to have painting in my home until I could get caption's taps laps lol.

      richly right is never just with my finish,
      called Carolyn