When all around seems dark as midnight,
hard as stone, or broken
When the voices one hears breathe frost;
life, a bitterly blue cold mystery
with death lurking
The miracle of the creative arts
is the bright star that makes
being awake livable
Enabling the heart with
desire to continue pulsing.
Author notes
"please mention along with your option name and numbers, this 'I've got a lovely bunch of coconuts"
word bank: midnight, stone, broken, breathe, frost, blue, cold, mystery, death, miracle, star, heart, desire
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Olivia33
Amaranthine Lover
A contest entry
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900 points, ended December 11, 2008, 32 entries
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Comments
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there is something about a simple beauty in this, it's really great
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"The miracle of the creative arts
is the bright star that makes
being awake livable"
Amazing, I've felt what you're saying here so many times. Your words are beautiful, and the message is wonderful. Every word is perfect, I wouldn't change a thing.
Well penned,
~lost
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Thank you! Have a great week
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A great use of the words provided in the word bank. I loved the imagery. Thank you for entering and good luck to you :0
Much love
Ylova
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