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Offering

Perceptively,
she offered him
a chance to realize
his dream of flight.



Author notes

Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: painted by Daeni Pino
14 words

A contest entry

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  • Alyzeh
    December 11, 2008

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    Wow. What a lovely write.

    Gold, very well deserved.

    Love
    Alyzeh


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 24, 2008

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    Brialliant work here and so deserving of the gold!
    Well done and congratulations with this piece my friend. Thanks for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Rachel Kruger
    November 23, 2008
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    Brilliant (and interesting!) take on the picture prompt.

    Congratulations on your gold!


  • FransB gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    Ah

    this is a wonderful write. Frans


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 23, 2008
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    wow ~ well interpreted... x


  • Jesann gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    Great !!
    Love your view of the pic prompt.

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