together
through slushy surroundings,
forgetting world around them
rocking cradle,
in island of their own.
Author notes
photo painted by ~ Daeni Pino
A contest entry
- In fifteen words by Lavender Butterfly.
525 points, ended November 23, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a wonderful poem dad congratulations on your honor
maralisa
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Beautiful poem here..Congrats on the HM!
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thank you sister
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Welcome
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immensely creative... x
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Sort of Sensual
Likening to the feeling of being alone with your lover on a deserted island or lost together in the woods with nothing to hold onto but one another. Fantastic piece. ~~
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