Lost in thought,
she sat like a fragile
blossom waiting for the dawn.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: Amalia
13 words
A contest entry
- In thirteen words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 23, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Ooh..you have taken the prompt to magnificence in your words..Thirteen words that express beauty, passion and such feeling! She pensively looks yearningly for the blossoming....Terrific write!
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Thank you Rose... reads and comments are always appreciated...
Ken
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This is just simplistically beautiful... x
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nice...I like it
good luck
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this is a nice poem.. you did an excellent job
good luck
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