I am the queen of this holy land,
the broken, twisted,
and incredibly sad,
I gve to you,
just three words,
see them through,
and know,
I love you.
forget the idea,
of martyrs and saints,
God's and Goddess',
we are unified,
by love without restraints.
We all have but one thing,
that makes us better,
makes us sing,
love for the masses,
cruelty to those,
is but a sin by nature,
not doctrine disclosed.
So give someone a hug,
instead of going to mass,
a kiss on the lips,
with a touch of class.
A warm embrace,
to melt frozen tears,
a sigh of relief,
to relax someone's fears.
We are the next generation,
lets give all we've got,
love is eternal,
though it may seem like not a lot.
A contest entry
- Spirituality Challenge by dustytiger.
900 points, ended November 29, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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i really like what you have written here, it is very strong, and has a lot of power behind it, i like that there is a new hope in the new generation, there are a couple of typos near the beginning, and it should be gods and goddesses the apostrophes on plural words really bother me other than that i enjoyed if very much, best of luck in the contest
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