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To the Earthworms Currently Consuming the Body of My Dead Cat


I hope
you choke
on her tumor.

Author notes

I present: brevity.
Also: truth.


Quote: "i float in an endless sea of nothingness.
i decompose and rot; no Jesus to resurrect me."
-Adsaige

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  • Luna Tique Fringe
    November 22, 2008

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    this gets props for the shortest poem with the longest title.. but seriously, a good title. The poem stands alone without it, so that's good .. more a mystery, though

    if i'm not mistaken this is the haykanu form, yes?