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A Moment in Time

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It is in these simplest moments
when fond memories
are etched into our bones.

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painted by ~ Daeni Pino


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  • Beret55 silver member
    November 1
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    Supriseing what small things our minds chuse to keep from our childhood.
    Great take on the pic.


  • condor gold member
    February 14

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    Yes. Little moments like these can definately inprint themselves on your mind for life. I like the idea of these two little tikes growing up and remembering back to this moment in time. I smile. Congratulations on your bronze for this one.


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    December 28, 2008
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    "are etched into our bones."

    love that last line


  • jackreed3 gold member
    December 24, 2008
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    a NICE WRITE JACKREED3...


  • iamlost gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    A strong message in this, I love what you've done with this, and how the story enhances the picture, more than the other way around.


  • Alyzeh
    December 11, 2008

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    Awww.. this was brilliant! Beautiful words you have penned here. Stunning write.


  • chilali
    December 11, 2008

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    This is so beautiful. A great take on the picture. Congratulations on the Bronze. Keep it flowing.

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Beret55 silver member
    December 4, 2008
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    A great take on the prompt. Well thought of..


  • LoveLikePoetry
    November 30, 2008
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    This is amazing
    I love it
    The simplicity is great


  • Jesann gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    Lovely words, so true that simple things can create such fond memories.
    Congrats on the bronze.


  • Sunkissed xo
    November 30, 2008

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    Aww! What a truly lovely write. You convey such meaning and emotion through your simple words; I can really see things through the character's eyes. So very lovely. Thanks for entering the contest
    Peace ♥


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    I really love this piece...beautifully written...wonderful take on the pic

    good luck


  • Patpowers silver member
    November 28, 2008

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    Good work on this short piece!! I liked the prompt in this. THANKS!!!


  • Neet
    November 27, 2008

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    Sweet

    Lovely words and great picture to illustrate fond memories. It is good to remember these times, helps build up the soul xx


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 23, 2008
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    just beautiful... x

  • StarPrincess
    November 22, 2008

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    Very Cute

    Patty, you are so right. They say a picture is worth a thousand words, but this picture is worth millions. The picture shows the benefits of sharing. This is a vey cute poem, so full of truth and fondness, that we can't help but have a happy heart. So I agree totally that life's simplest moments brings us fond memories, that we will keep forever. Thank you for sharing this delightful piece.

    Love & hugs,
    Barbara

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